Wednesday, August 5, 2009

My Family Band

My family's like a band
all playing our own part
we sometimes disagree on the tune
but we all have a kind heart

My dad is like the drums
he always keeps it steady
he keeps the beat going
and he helps us when we're ready

My mum is like the piano
she has the most wonderful tune
when we all fight she fixes the problem
but we'll still get in trouble soon

My brother is like a violin;
the music that can be so kind
he likes to make up his own tune-
he's sweet but gets annooying after a while

In my case im like a guitar
i help the family sing
and i always improvise my tune
cos im the guitar doing my own thing!

3 comments:

lauren said...

OMG IT IS SO MUCH LIKE MY METAPHOR, SAME IDEA. URZ IS LOTZ LONGER AND REALLY GOOD

peopleperson1 said...

hey lauren
u shld post ur metaphor poem
pls do
i really want 2 c it!!!

jazz said...

omg..........im cant be bothered 2 tell u wat i tink............mmmmmmmm